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nuu, 10 Jun 2007 05:38 pm
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Poor Josh, he just got SHAFTED BY AN EMO KID.
*points and laughs*
Anyway, I can't handle angst angst angst too well. Is everyone sick of all the angst yet? I sure am.
The next chapter ought to be a bit lighter. Hopefully.
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cloverx, 15 Jun 2007 02:08 am
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Cast: EMOPWN
Direct hit
Damage: 789
LEVEL UP: 27
Achieved new title: Back-Taker of Sundays
Gained new attack: Nine Inch Nail Thrust
Gained New Items: Eyeliner, Bad Poetry
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Mikenno, 15 Jun 2007 02:00 am
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I am fucking wading in it. <3
ANGST MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND! Sexily.
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amsdia (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 02:05 am
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... I knew the last page was too good to be true. T___T
Love Josh's expression in the second-last panel - like he's trying not to scream in frustration. Something about his posture in the last panel irks me though... probably the fact that the left arm seems to have utterly vanished.
All in all, another brilliant page. I still like the way you hint at light. <3 And I so totally cannot wait for the more light-hearted third chapter. *grins*
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creamsoda, 15 Jun 2007 02:07 am
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*cries* Poor Josh. Does he already have a crush? Oh-well, he got to see May smile and now he's serious head over heels. :D
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Jack (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 02:10 am
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I think this page improves where you left off last page. It just seemed a little too bipolar, but this page makes it realistic again.
Shite man! You are great at plot...and dialog...and animation...and, well...basically you are one of the most talented comic artists I have ever seen!
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Batsu_angel, 15 Jun 2007 02:16 am
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hooray for angst! It makes good plot ^_^
*hugs Josh*
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Angel (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 02:16 am
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Poor Josh éè *hugs poor Josh*
Anyway, excellent work as always!
They're just gorgeous!! ^_____^
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thislonelyplace, 15 Jun 2007 02:26 am
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excellent job. =D
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sara (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 03:36 am
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YEESH! amazing as usual! i just want to pick up Josh, take him to a bar, get him really drunk and rape him. i dont know how that would help him, but it would make me feel really happy!
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walkwithtime, 15 Jun 2007 03:41 am
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awesome awesomeeee... nice plot-ness xD I'll be looking forward to some lighter happier stuff, but a bit of angst is always good to add some depth to the story!
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Corenn (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 04:43 am
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ANGST ANGST ANGST ! \o/ Humor is good... But angst... Too *o* Poor Josh ! Beautiful pages though.
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Kuromei, 15 Jun 2007 04:46 am
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OUCH! >o< Now I feel sorry for Josh. He really tried to make things right between them, in his own awkward way.
And don't worry about too much angst. It all evens out in the end. ^w^
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Keki, 15 Jun 2007 04:50 am
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Into chapter three, I'm hoping for what all fangirls are hoping for. Eyecandy. XD Who will <3 who first, I wonder.
And yeah, poor Josh. He shouldn't think so deeply on it. I'd have kicked Metis' ass ten times over for his emo-ness. (Still love them both, though. X3)
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Lancha, 15 Jun 2007 05:20 am
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ohh!! congrats on finishing the second chapter *___*~
<3
actually I am really wondering what Josh is thinking in the last two panels.
OMG!!! the emo leveled up!! XD
whahahaha~ XD
and the items he gained are awesome. but I think it is strange that he got his eyeliner recently on level 27 O_o; maybe a waterproof eyeliner? XD' (allthough they all are.... >.>; )
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Aqah (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 05:58 am
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y'know that sfx *HUARRRK!* ?
yeah.
its the stop-go thing...like, almost! but not really. THATS making ME all angsty. there better be some major <3 <3 <3 in chapter 3 dammit!
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fangirl_xX (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 06:30 am
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ZOMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! uhwaaaaah run after him Josh!!! GIVE HIM A HUG!!! omg i really didn't think tha wud happen, from the last page i fort they'd be friends or summin!!!
:( im so sad now i really dnt no wats guna happen??
Josh needs to make it up to him or summin, give him a kiss!! hehe tha'd work for me!! XD lmao
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checkered fool (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 06:37 am
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Aw, poor Josh...have been cruelly decieved by the shoujo bubbles!
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Aishiru, 15 Jun 2007 06:54 am
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... D:
is it wrong for me to start expecting some good shonen ai coming up?
I'm getting viiiibessss
Who's the emo kid now? *gives Josh hugs*
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Maria-Minamino, 15 Jun 2007 07:39 am
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It's so sad...the two of it. At this rate it seems they'll never be friends in the least. Josh better start sucking up and making it better...
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iSlacker, 15 Jun 2007 08:33 am
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Oh gods. This panel is wonderful.
I love it ;_;
And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Josh's face in the bottom left panel. It's perfect!
Perrrrrfect.
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hatsuchan, 15 Jun 2007 08:48 am
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ZOMG it's thee eeeeeeeeend . . . and very angsty indeed. saaaad.
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LucidPaint, 15 Jun 2007 09:16 am
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dude.....turn around and smooch him! brighten his day. lol!
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Fairygirl, 15 Jun 2007 09:56 am
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Josh...go run after him and kiss him!!!!!
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needlespike (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 10:12 am
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oh god! chapter three is going to be full of blushes <3
and we will see charles again !!! and jade too! I wonder if metis is going to tell him about what happened.... I can't wait XD
is the sunday's update will include chapter 3's cover only?????? ;_;
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PUFFYworshipper, 15 Jun 2007 10:27 am
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Wow, I feel bad for Josh. What is he thinking in the last panel??? Maybe he's developed a crush on Metis a few pages back, and now he feels rejected? He pretty much opened up to Metis; I don't think he has with anyone else. "I admire you. You're not afraid to be youself." I wonder how the next chapter will start off... it would be really awkward and hard to talk to each other afraid what happened. I'm so excited; you're such a great artist and writer! And cloverx helps, too, so that's great, props to you, too!
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Odonto (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 10:32 am
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OH MY GOD!!! That is SOOO EMO!!! And still loveable!!
*got addicted to emoness, and it's tottaly this comic's fault*
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DontForget2Smile (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 10:48 am
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Go punch him again Josh! Then he won't be able to stop thinking about you no matter what!! ^__^
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Cyanidetakun (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 11:02 am
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nuuu!!
Come back May!!
Kiss and make up! xDD
Josh looks soooo pissed in that bottom panel
haha
Too bad he's fallen for May or he'd probably hit em again xD
Angst up to my eyeballs xD
Something lighter would help me to not drown lol
I hope we get some
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yaoi_gamer, 15 Jun 2007 12:17 pm
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... horray for an update... hmmmm... will there something that will bloom between metis and josh? hmmm... i wonder what will happen next... :3
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Nanatsu, 15 Jun 2007 12:57 pm
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Har, >_< i like it!
i'm looking soo forward to see the next page.
- yay >_> and lighter stuff would be great!
thanks nuu and cloverx -
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KHFanForAll, 15 Jun 2007 01:26 pm
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Go Cloverx!!
xD
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Kai, 15 Jun 2007 01:27 pm
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awwwww! poor josh!
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CaFFy (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 02:44 pm
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Hehe. Josh looks angsty. AND ANGST MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND. Or at least stories. =D I want to see Josh pin Metis to the wall and makeout with him. lmao. Will it happen?
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Remmy, 15 Jun 2007 02:56 pm
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Nuuuu! YOU ARE TO LOVE JOSH!
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Skriptkitty, 15 Jun 2007 03:27 pm
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LULZ. Josh is setting himself up to be the perfect uke prey...XD
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Syntic (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 03:37 pm
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Cloverx your comment pwns my face. XDDD
Ah~ That's what makes a manga artist so amazing. With just one panel you change the atmosphere and that's definitely an amazing skill to have.
Oh Metis' you're so emotionally hardcore. XD
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kawaiicraze, 15 Jun 2007 04:21 pm
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metic is so pwnsome. XD
and cloverx: your comment is fugging awesome; and it pwns us all.
:D
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kawaiicraze, 15 Jun 2007 04:22 pm
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XDDD i meant to say metis, lmfao. not metic. XD whooops.
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CONEJITOASESINO, 15 Jun 2007 04:55 pm
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Awww!
Is Josh crying?! He's all ready in love I know it. Yay! So far this story is great. Good job!
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Rush, 15 Jun 2007 05:38 pm
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*lip quiver*
JOSH. *hugs computer*
You silly emo monkey =D
oh btw, I really did hug my monitor. Damn you Nuu and cloverx. Making me all emotional.
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guest (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 05:39 pm
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haaaahh josh<33 I need more. I neeeed ittt.
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Mata, 15 Jun 2007 06:05 pm
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The damage was done. 789! ;O *gasp* Out of...one thousand? /=]
You got SAID, Josh. ;]
"Buy you a drank~ But ya breath stank~" ;D <- Ignore?
A bitangsty but sure glad it will get lighter...? ;O *sigh* I thought the last page was hinting some kinda shounen-ai...It was but...SMEX HIM UUUUUPPP, JOSH~ ;]]]
Can't wait...for more. ;]]]
Love,
~Mata
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kittykitty85, 15 Jun 2007 06:07 pm
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its not to late Josh you can still glomp him and kiss the hell outta him.
Though that'd be rushing *_*;
he'd probably slap you.
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Guest, 15 Jun 2007 07:32 pm
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W0ot! So SO glad Metis didn't go all....um..emo? LoL...seriously though, the last page kinda irked me. That smile and sudden acceptance of Josh's appology just seemed..so uncharacteristic and ooc for Metis.
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Mythee, 15 Jun 2007 08:29 pm
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Naw, I wouldn't say that missus guest- you may be used to exaggeratedly simplified personalities in anime and manga (because that kind of consistency to the chosen cliché of a character makes it easier for you to "know" the character from the beginning) but I LOVE this comic right now because it shows a complexity of personality that isn't present in most other comics. You're going to have to read a freakin' lot of this before you can say you really "know" what Metis is like. This is much more realist x3
Although I wish Metis was less angsty 8D;;
But Josh is perfect >w<
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Shippa (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 08:42 pm
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'Run after him, you fool!'
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melissamalice, 15 Jun 2007 09:11 pm
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this is the perfect amt of angst ;D love it!
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Dirty-Little-Urchin, 15 Jun 2007 10:11 pm
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Oh my. Is that.. regret I see?! >__<
Tehe. Poor, poor Josh.
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Solo, 15 Jun 2007 10:33 pm
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Run after him, tackle him to the ground and make sweet love to him!!
^///^!!
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kari (Guest), 15 Jun 2007 10:55 pm
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i be tired of the angst!
WAH! I hope Charles and jay are in the next chapter more!
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lpwriterkalnhz07, 16 Jun 2007 01:46 am
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THATS INSANE!!!!
GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!
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Infiny (Guest), 16 Jun 2007 02:25 am
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I have to admit, when I saw this page... I LOL'd. Oh, of course teh angst must go on. But I still can't wait for the next chapter~~~ Back to school, I imagine (zomg Charles). Metis is a nice character though. He's really human, and I get where he's coming from, while at the same time feeling bad for poor Josh~
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nurix, 16 Jun 2007 04:52 am
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wee! don't worry about the angst stuff! your comic is really good! yeah! congratulations on finishing chapter 2! now we'll wait for the third chapter!
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kupocchi, 16 Jun 2007 09:02 am
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XD 789!
Yay for emopowar :B
Angst kills me too...I'm waiting for them to start being friends. :'D
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Alex (Guest), 16 Jun 2007 01:56 pm
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The angst. THE AAAAANGST. D:
Stop being so emo May and be nice to Josh >: o
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Moofius, 16 Jun 2007 09:20 pm
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JE SUIS EXCITE!
Alright, enough French for one day! ^o^ NANYWAYS!
I am excited! (That's what I wrote in French *psst!*) So yah. ^__^ I can't wait.
Angst is okay if it's not MY life. xP Because then I can laugh at others misery! ^__^
-ish violently bopped over the head with a rock- X_x
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nappyhead, 16 Jun 2007 10:43 pm
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phew! I thought his change of attitude was a little too quick in the last page. Go Metis I'm sure Josh will fix it somehow...or maybe his friends.
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desertkitt, 17 Jun 2007 01:27 am
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OMG!!!
The angst- and the look- and... and the... the EMO PWN!! Dude, harsh much?!?! LOL, I luv Nuu, I luv Cloverx, but most of all, I hate all this angst (where's the lovin?) Sorry, but it came to me, spur of the moment. 'Neeways, beautiful, as always... but I wnat some lovin, the tension is just... Ahh, it'll make it sweeter when it comes.
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Emo Child (Guest), 17 Jun 2007 08:33 am
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Awwwwwwww! Josh got it bad! lol! Way to go metis!
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amuffin4u, 05 Jul 2007 11:46 pm
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Josh vs Ichigo??
HAHa n that second to last panel, with the n=knit eyebrown, the hair, and the chin, basically the whole face, Josh looked alot like ICHIGO!!! lol, keep it up, art rocks, love Metis's hair to the max!
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