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» Comics - Chapter 3 - The Waltz of Malcontent - June 17th, 2007, 2:00 am

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nuu, June 16th, 2007, 11:55 pm

Wwwoooooo.... New chapter.
Hey, I'm in Vegas right now! It's great here! It's really hot! I'm afraid to step outside!

Oh yes please vote for me:

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cloverx, June 17th, 2007, 2:12 am

Because I was a die hard Dick Tracy fangirl at the age of four. What woman wasn't? Yellow trench coats scream sex for me and always will.

Nuu: get your ass off the freakin' computer, woman! You're in Vegas! It's always hot there! Win me a car! A shiny one!

cloverx, June 20th, 2007, 4:01 pm

Ah....1,000 fans exactly. Awesome. Oodles of sexy thanking for you guys and the lovely Nuu.
Also, about the update, um, it should have updated today, but it didn't. >> I haven't been able to talk to Nuu, so....
If you'd like to see the next page, though, it IS up on Y!gallery.
Er, you might have to be a member.

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User Comments:

Kai, June 17th, 2007, 2:10 am

wow, cool! it looks like an old movie poster
*first comment dance*

creamsoda, June 17th, 2007, 2:19 am

OMG I JUST saw this on Y. *spazzes*

And it's soooooo pretty and old-movie and *drools*

Syntic (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 2:23 am


It's like Sin City... except I never saw the movie. 8 D;; *shot*

Lovely. : 3

Fairygirl, June 17th, 2007, 2:23 am

Awesome page!

Batsu_angel, June 17th, 2007, 2:38 am

*dies from the awesomeness of the art*

Ellegedly (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 2:39 am

mmm, so mysterious and detective-y

AppleRush, June 17th, 2007, 2:40 am

Yay Dick Tracy! I almost remember the movie. I was really young last time I saw it. Now I want to go out and buy it. Anyway.... lovely chapter cover. I can't wait for the next chapter.

-bounces up and down-

rawrbethzilla, June 17th, 2007, 3:08 am

Whoo~ Next chapter ^__^ The page looks incredible.

Hope you're having fun in Vegas! :3

amsdia (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 3:43 am

That cover art is so many levels of prettiness like I cannot begin to describe.

Was wondering if you're planning on altering the cover art to chapter two to include a title as well? I was just thinking it'd be nice to sort of standardise the cover art, and the giant "Chapter 3: Insert Title Here" sort of came out of nowhere. Just a thought.

I now have mental images of Metis as a private detective and Josh as the cop who gets entangled with him [literally?] on a case. Charles can be the evil mastermind. Mweheheh. *is shot*

SaNa (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 5:15 am

Beautiful art. Kinda different from the other chapter covers 0o Metis is so sexay here XD

allyoucaneater, June 17th, 2007, 5:27 am

Nice cover! May looks hot and shadowfull (meh.. kill my mind, please).. Charles looks like--Charles.. ~_~''.. and Josh's ... police hat thing makes him looks weird ... (no I'm not commenting evilly to Josh because he's done wrong..) makes me think of an egg.. and to think I ate half-boiled egg for breakfast.. (why am I telling you this anyway?)

this cover makes me think of James Bond.. but alas, I hate James Bond..and detective-y stories... nice light-shadow and silhouette (meh.. thank god there's wikipidea... or I'm toast at spelling that word) effect (i'm not gonna write that compliment but since I wanna make this x-tra long and stuff, I'll just write junk to annoy you to no end).. I could see the strands of hair on Metis.. waitaminute... ZOMG! Charles have those weird stray clump of hair?! Why didn't I ever notice??! O.o ... oh yes.. my lack of skill to be observance I guess...

oh! Hope you win something at Vegas! (literally)Break a leg and win a shiny-neon-red-with-black-and-yellow-and-orange-fire-drawn-on-it sports car!! (phew.. that's kinda long..)

Infiny (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 6:10 am

LOL. Awesome <3

Thunder_Child, June 17th, 2007, 6:13 am

I LOVE Metis in this. The hat was a good move

Bl@d3, June 17th, 2007, 8:03 am

I like hats >>...<<
I have a hat like the one Metis is wearing!. . .it used ta be my dads XD

LadyNightshade, June 17th, 2007, 8:12 am

This page is awesome on a stick!

hatsuchan, June 17th, 2007, 8:46 am

It's smexy, very smexy. =D

Oblivious_Monk, June 17th, 2007, 9:46 am

I want their hats....

So pretty!

EmiIsRighteous, June 17th, 2007, 10:30 am

waaa~! i love this cover!! XD

DC_Child, June 17th, 2007, 11:16 am

The cover looks freaking awesome.

DreamGazer, June 17th, 2007, 12:36 pm

Awsome cover. I always love how you deal with balck, white and shades of grey.

YJK (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 12:41 pm

(trying to think of something to say besides just WOW!)

. . . nope, I've got nothing. LOOOOVE IT!

arataamaya, June 17th, 2007, 12:46 pm

That's soooo good!
Did I tell you I idolize your amazing SKILL?!

Have fun in Vegas! ^-^

nurix, June 17th, 2007, 12:49 pm

woah! awesome as always! it's so nice!
and uh, you're in vegas?! gamble, baby!
er i mean, be a good kid and don't waste your money ok? but if you can't help it, you can freely send cash to me. *ehem* er, gotta go

twinkiedreams, June 17th, 2007, 3:25 pm


Panda-Chan, June 17th, 2007, 4:37 pm

Who's the other guy?
<3 I thought it was an emo version of Josh.

guest (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 5:06 pm

Ch- Charles! *__*

Mythee, June 17th, 2007, 5:13 pm

Awesome style xDD Hahaha- will this turn into a detective story? 8D

Alex (Guest), June 17th, 2007, 5:26 pm

Yay chapter 3!!

Skriptkitty, June 17th, 2007, 5:26 pm

Your contrasting skills NEVER CEASE to amaze me. O__O <3

Ohh...film noir = love.

Remmy, June 17th, 2007, 6:59 pm

You have no idea how awesome this is. D:<


yaoi_gamer, June 17th, 2007, 7:36 pm

cool cover... :D

Mata, June 17th, 2007, 9:23 pm

The cover reminds me of Sherlock Holmes...._.

Maybe, it's just me? =0

To Nuu: I've been to Vegas before...I hated it there. ._. Only thing I liked were the rides/rollercoasters......and watching people gamble away their life savings. ;]

I also thought I died several times over there. ._. But I woke up to the sound of the sucky-ace AC and unfortunately found myself alive. ._____."



xXxkiaraxXx, June 17th, 2007, 11:25 pm

D: (<-jawdrop) . . . O M G . . . THAT IS FRICKING AMAZING!!!! Wow!!! It looks so good and shadowy and detective-y and and and!! *searching for words, speechless* . . . *gives up and just flails arms crazily*

Kuromei, June 18th, 2007, 4:45 am

OxO.... *bows to the greatness that is nuu and cloverx*
*faints from the awesomeness*

kupocchi, June 18th, 2007, 2:39 pm

Oh wow, this is amazing. <3

Infiny (Guest), June 18th, 2007, 2:49 pm

I didnt mention this, but that title is very catchy~

melissamalice, June 18th, 2007, 3:41 pm

oh film noir, how you get me everytime

Wolfen, June 18th, 2007, 4:31 pm

wow super nice cover :D
I think I like Josh better, but Metis is still my fav! ^^

CaFFy (Guest), June 18th, 2007, 4:48 pm

I'm happy and all but .... I WANT THE STORYY. xD

Moofius, June 18th, 2007, 7:12 pm

You've got so much talent. I can't wait to see mangas by you in stores. ^__^

... Unless... you already have some out there?! O_O;; SWEET! If so, I'd like to know the titles and stuff so I can get them!

Sanoa, June 18th, 2007, 8:15 pm


Looks like charles is gonna be in it?

Kouya (Guest), June 19th, 2007, 1:20 am

Dahahahaha! cloverx you have the loveliest humor =w= nuu too. HELL YAH I'M VOTING FOR YAH! Keep updating, things are getting uber de duper suspenseful now *sparkly*

Lauren (Guest), June 20th, 2007, 5:33 am

Hmmm... I was reading back through the archives just the other day, and this time the scene in the beginning where Charles gets all super dangerous when he thinks Josh has hit Metis (when in fact Metis was just clocked out by the bookshelf) made me wonder... He's so familiar with Metis... I was thinking, "Is he pretty much in love with Metis himself? Is that best friend behaviour, or... SOMETHING MORE?"

kittykitty85, June 20th, 2007, 8:30 am

TRENCHCOAT BISHONENS!! EEE!! -does the happy dance-

VociferatedVehemence, June 20th, 2007, 3:15 pm

When the hell are you updating? No threats, no bad feelings... I'm just depending on it.

amiko_16, June 21st, 2007, 2:29 am


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Reigan, August 21st, 2010, 11:58 pm

Ermmm, the third guy looks like he belongs in a mine.

He's my new friend >.>

MaryStrawberries, August 22nd, 2010, 8:46 pm

GAWD, cloverx's comments are almost as good as the comic!!! *o*

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