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cloverx, June 20th, 2007, 11:52 pm


Ah, this page holds a very special manga-page-shaped piece of my heart. This is because this page is the only page so far that has dialog entirely written by me. Notice how the dialogue flows so well, contains just the right amount of noir, and has no apparent connection to even the tiniest bit of the story so far. Love me. Love my dialogue.




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TigerLily, June 20th, 2007, 10:29 pm


Yay! An update! Whooo Hooooo!


kasi, June 20th, 2007, 10:29 pm


Ooooh!! Dramatic!! I love the background and how you draw. I'm uber jealous and I can't wait for an update!!!


Yuyu, June 20th, 2007, 10:34 pm


Congratulations on 1000 fans!


hayden (Guest), June 20th, 2007, 10:34 pm


omg? Our dear Josh and Metis have turned into crime fighter?


CaFFy (Guest), June 20th, 2007, 10:41 pm


lmao. I just burst out laughing for some reason. xD


melissamalice, June 20th, 2007, 10:44 pm


NOIR, FTW!


amsdia (Guest), June 20th, 2007, 10:48 pm


... whut.

XDDD

Loving the background detail. And noir. Noir. Noir. *brain breaks from sheer prettiness*

Looking forward to seeing where this is going. Detective!Metis. So cool. *beams*


DontForget2Smile (Guest), June 20th, 2007, 10:48 pm


Hmmm, I love the drawings as usual but it's different. I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses.


Kai, June 20th, 2007, 10:52 pm


woo!


Syn_Senielle, June 20th, 2007, 10:55 pm


Congrats on 1,000 fans. ^^ Did Metis turn into a detective or summit? o.e Gah, I need more sleep for things to make sense! *Falls over.*


fluffylemons12, June 20th, 2007, 11:06 pm


Cool.


walkwithtime, June 20th, 2007, 11:24 pm


wow very artistic and...noir xD I love the dialogue/whatever it is


Panda-Chan, June 20th, 2007, 11:25 pm

Congrats on having 1000 fans!
I love noir!<3


syntic (Guest), June 20th, 2007, 11:27 pm


Haha, omigosh, who's the one thinking up this crazy scenerio? Josh is it you? Oh-oh! Metis you sly guy... Or could it be Mr. Mysterious Charles? *shot* 8 D


rawrbethzilla, June 20th, 2007, 11:46 pm


This looks so cool so far X3 The way your drew the city is great~

Congratulations on 1000 fans!


Sanoa (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 12:21 am


CHAPTA 3! Awsome ^^


nozmo, June 21st, 2007, 12:22 am


I like the dialogue. A lot.
This page makes me happy. <3


Reetistal, June 21st, 2007, 12:28 am


Yay Chapter 3!! <3
Interesting.....


Lancha, June 21st, 2007, 1:06 am


whoaa O___O I wonder how-- this will fit in with the story so far XD


xXxkiaraxXx, June 21st, 2007, 1:11 am


Wow O.O It looks so cool. . . Don't know what it has to do with the story yet but it looks AMAZING!!! XDDDD


YJK (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 1:26 am


YES! Film Noir style! Love it!


Ellegedly (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 4:48 am


:O

Awesome page :3


coute, June 21st, 2007, 5:47 am


1005 fans... :000000


allyoucaneater, June 21st, 2007, 6:17 am


Meh... you updated later than usual... I dunno what this got to do with the comic (mah... detective-y like.. ~~'') Nice looking anyway..


Taiyo, June 21st, 2007, 6:22 am


Awesome!! Lol i just finished doing film noir for extension english, well done! XD


beckyW, June 21st, 2007, 6:26 am

XD
I can't help but giggle at this page. :D Great job with the toning!


VociferatedVehemence, June 21st, 2007, 7:14 am


Hahaha, wonderful. The monologue is awesome, too. (Monologue rather than dialogue, right?)


Kuromei, June 21st, 2007, 7:46 am


So...AWESOME!!! XD

And congrats on the 1005 fans! :D


Nanatsu, June 21st, 2007, 7:53 am


tahaha XD yeah cloverx, i have no idea whats going on!
i think this rainy city view is well done and these three panels at the bottom, too : shut window - detective like desk - hand opening the blind slightly - and together with the text- >_< it certainly is an atmospheric page ^_^ and in this context it's awfully funny ! i wonder what you'll come up with next.
*hands over virtual flowers* congratulations on 1000+ fans!! ^_^


Happy Hatter, June 21st, 2007, 8:33 am


What city is this? Seattle? Now THATS the rainy city


needlespike (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 9:46 am


I added 'honeydew' to my LJ interests and I was glad to see that two other members did the same thing!!
we should start a community!

http://www.livejournal.com/interests.bml?int=honeydew+syndrome


Guest, June 21st, 2007, 10:44 am


There is soo much love. 1000+ fnas, and I'm one of 'em!
I bow to your awesomeness and noir. (plus it's a funny kinda unrelatedness...) Is that a word?


nurix, June 21st, 2007, 11:26 am


congratz for having 1000+ fans! you deserve it for making a superb comic! *showers confetti*
and yay for randomness!


BlinkyTheRed, June 21st, 2007, 11:32 am


This page cracked me up. Love the noir writing!

Keep up the excellent work. This is my favorite comic at the moment and I always look forward to the updates..


Annonymous (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 12:36 pm


O: Gasp! My first thought when I read this page was "wait, what bookmark did I click?" because I didn't recognize it as Honeydew. Then, when I looked and affirmed that this was, indeed, the right comic, my second thought was that a time skip had taken place. Maybe it isn't going to be a high school romance at all. Maybe that was how they met, sohowever many years ago, and this is where the story really takes off. Or maybe it isn't at all.


Moofius, June 21st, 2007, 12:51 pm

WEW!
Loves to your word-ies! YAY! NEW PAGE!

I love your rain. And the mug. -obesseion with mug- What color is it? This page is awesome.

Because it's raining. RAIN! O__O;;;

Yes, I'm crazy. Now shush, I'm starring at rain. xD

I LOVE YOU! <2222


me (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 5:12 pm


It IS very noir flavoured!

it even has Venecian blinds!
[a noir cliche]

eee. I am a pathetic sap for classic noir films [and old Twilight zone reruns, go figure]

You win at life! :33


edit: OH OH. is this in the future?! cause the nametag says
"ME [TIS?]
private" [eye? investigator?]

and yet another noir element! you make me glee *__*



[background: Twiiiliiight zoooonnnne]


MissThong, June 21st, 2007, 5:38 pm


Oh! I like the dialog!


Cyanidetakun (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 6:11 pm


I love noirs!
So much fun ^^


Crazy-Taco, June 21st, 2007, 7:53 pm


Woo, WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN.
[Weird suspence music I guess?]


B L A C K, June 21st, 2007, 8:12 pm


*love*
i feel like i've heard the line about dogs before. like it might fit in Casablanca or something. XD


cloverx, June 21st, 2007, 8:16 pm


Needlespike: ....one of those members is me >__>


needlespike (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 9:27 pm


oh god @_@ that is so true!! XDDD;;
I srsly think we should start a community,, I wanted to make some HDS icons for the longest time now ;^;


Remmy, June 21st, 2007, 9:56 pm


xD This page is really nice.
I'm trying to refrain using a certain quote from The Crow though....


Aya_sama (Guest), June 21st, 2007, 11:10 pm


Ahhhh...I do love me some old fashioned detective stories! Philip Marlow, Guy Nior, Harry Nile...this reminds me of that.
I love your comic, your style, everything! I read many online comics, and yours is by far the one I love the most!


wntfrieswitdat (Guest), June 22nd, 2007, 12:15 am


...its so randomm...gorgeous page...i'm lovin it...

and the dialogue is brilliant..:DD


TragicallHistorye, June 24th, 2007, 3:50 pm


*squeee*
I saw this on Gaia...
Very nice.


BananaMuffinPop, August 17th, 2009, 10:02 pm

WATCHMEN
Reminds me of the opening speech by Rorschach in Watchmen xD LOLOLOL I love it. And Metis makes me fangasm.


Themarkees, April 24th, 2010, 2:39 am


Lol here comes the Rorshack speach


TaylorWayero, May 6th, 2010, 6:10 pm

@BannaMuffinpop
I JUST SEARCHED TEH COMMENTS SEARCHING FOR THAT!!!!!! IKNORITE!?!?

I'M not the only one!!! Great job on shading/tone on this!


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