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nuu, July 1st, 2007, 2:18 am

I wanted to have a domain-site for this up by today, but I couldn't manage. I can't code for shit, even though I've been trying all week. Well, it'll take a bit longer...
My favorite panel is the last panel.

Anyway, if you haven't seen it yet (not enough pimping?) please check this link out: http://steam-pilot.livejournal.com/10134.html#cutid1

Oh yes please vote for me! :D


Oh yeah, Josh's hair got long again, in case you didn't notice.

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nozmo, July 1st, 2007, 2:05 am

Oh. It's Josh.
And he's looking for Charles? :OOOO
The third panel is cuuute~

Hyrea, July 1st, 2007, 2:07 am

May in the last panel looks very uke-ish. XwX

D8 Josh and Charles? Oh gawd!!

amsdia (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 2:10 am

So lemme get this straight. Josh knows that Charles and Metis always hang out together? Doesn't that imply he isn't as completely clueless as Metis thinks he is? Which in turn implies that Metis is angsting over something [well, was] that doesn't really exist?

And... Josh is Watching Metis. He is so totally a stalker.

I have much love for chibi!Josh. He looks so frazzled-ly adorable, even from the back. I'm utterly in love with the first panel though - I love how you used tones and light there.

agouti, July 1st, 2007, 2:13 am

i think this is my favourite page now. :o


kupocchi, July 1st, 2007, 2:30 am

He's looking for Charles...? I wonder why. 8D
The third panel is so adorable! >//<

Dirty-Little-Urchin, July 1st, 2007, 2:41 am

Awww. I <3 this page!!
I know what Josh is doing..
He's trying to make May JEALOUS!
So he'll be all possessive like..;33
;-; IF only it were true..
Or maybe, when May's not looking.. Josh will jump him! ;O
Taha. I can dream can't I?
I ABSOLUTELY love how much you update, You're definitely my hero.
- Waits for the luvin she knows will soon enough beam from teh bois -
After waiting this long, it makes the first kiss so much more worth it. <333

syntic (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 2:59 am

Aww... and I was wrong, darn. XD

Haha, oh wells. Is it just me or is Charles always off somewhere with Jay? XD Haha... Probably doing some naughty things. *shot*

And did Josh always wore clopping boots? O_o

nevercry, July 1st, 2007, 3:00 am

I like Josh. All of his expressions are variations of 'blank'. And... the way he's drawn makes him look... harsh. Or simple. You know, without pretense. Or something. I don't know what I mean. I like him, though. Maybe even a little better than Metis.

Checkered Fool (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 3:11 am

Is it just me or does May's panel have shoujo sparkles in it? LOVE.

First2Go-Last2Know (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 3:18 am

Rape attack, plz. :'B

allyoucaneater, July 1st, 2007, 3:20 am

If this what happens to May every time he slacks off... SLACK OFF MORE METIS!!! XDD
You'll have to company of 'Le Jock' more!! (a torture to May...)

psst... Metis.. stop hating him, man! Or the opposite attract thing will happen one day... be scared... be VERY SCARED

Cyanidetakun (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 3:28 am

A new page
They meet again!
Now, kiss!
Kidding xD

needlespike (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 3:31 am

this is absolutely my favorite page that has both josh and metis~

it seems like charles signed up josh for this too, that's why he's looking for him! the thing that kept me from being sure is that he's not very fond of him in the first place.. so why now?
that's why he was determined that metis would accept it!!! he could easily read metis and he knew that he needed it.
my theory of course xD;;

Batsu_angel, July 1st, 2007, 4:01 am

awww, the third pannel is soooo cute! XD

hayden (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 4:20 am

Metis' eyes look as if they are going to pop out any time soon! KAWAII!!!! OMG!

Mata, July 1st, 2007, 4:44 am

+_+ *confuzzled*

Wonder why he's looking for Charles.. 8O

Eek! Drama??? D8

Ooh~ This whole page looks nice. ;] Suppa cute too~ <333


yaoi_gamer, July 1st, 2007, 4:45 am

tha-dump... can't wait for the next update... :3

Angel (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 6:04 am

Can't wait for the next update *o*
Chibi Metis is coooo cute!! *.*

Infiny (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 8:11 am

Yaay, Josh~ Nice awkward conversating, kids xD

also, syntic's "Haha, oh wells. Is it just me or is Charles always off somewhere with Jay? XD Haha... Probably doing some naughty things. *shot*" ?

HAHAHA THAT WAS TOTALLY MY FIRST THOUGHT WHEN I READ THAT. Lol. Jay is really pretty <3 He's been mentioned so hopefully we'll see him soon =D

fangirl_xXx, July 1st, 2007, 9:10 am

Josh looks hawt!! <3 i like his long hair XD

i love this page <3<3

Kuromei, July 1st, 2007, 9:40 am

It was Josh, but he wasn't looking for Metis. I was wrong. T.T (What else is new. >_>)

Lat-Chan, July 1st, 2007, 10:56 am

and the art just keeps getting prettier<3

One thing i noticed though, if Metis is sitting on a higher level than josh(in the stairs)then he should be looking down, and josh should be looking up in the two first panels:p
Might just be me though^^

Tenchan (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 11:00 am

Rank 8! Go you!

hatsuchan, July 1st, 2007, 11:03 am


Yeah, that's just me fantasizing, but whatever. This page looks awesome!

I'm so happy that I pre-ordered your oneshot. Since it is a preorder, does that mean you're still working on it some?

PorcelainDoll, July 1st, 2007, 11:07 am

Aw. I love this page! XD
And why is Josh looking for Charles?! :O
Are they getting it on behind May's back?!
more, please?

DontForget2Smile (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 11:48 am

Oohh, I love the first panel with Josh! It's purdy. <3 And me thinks.. What does Josh want with Charles? Is there some kinda plot between the two? Oohhh, interesting. ^__^

nurix, July 1st, 2007, 11:54 am

oh wow! an update! and yay! josh appeared! erm, if it's ok to ask you, how long does it take you to draw one page? as in, just the sketches? nothing, i juts wanted to ask. because i think i'm slow, hehe

Alex (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 12:14 pm

The first two panels are well done.. May and Josh look sexy :3 And May looks good in black >: D
Yay I wonder why Josh is looking for Charles..

amiko_16, July 1st, 2007, 12:17 pm

LOL 3rd panel= <3 <3
and the last panel looks awesome ^^
So do they get along now? o_o

..Charles and Jay being off together somewhere makes my mind go to baaaaaaaad places... XD;;;;;

fukafukashita, July 1st, 2007, 12:36 pm

omg- charles totally set them up! there is just nothing else to it-

charles is charles and we all know he was planning something....YES!

guest (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 12:45 pm

did Charles plan this :3 huhuhuhu I like May's little ;< face

Kai, July 1st, 2007, 12:51 pm

ahhh, they're so tense! It's driving me nuts!

rawrbethzilla, July 1st, 2007, 2:46 pm

May looks adorable in the third panel! ^___^

Hmm.. I wonder what's happening =O

sixpinkwhiskers, July 1st, 2007, 3:05 pm

ooooooooooooo all alllooonnneee

Remmy, July 1st, 2007, 3:41 pm

Luffles the chibi panel. <3

EDIT: Shall now commence freakout about the Charles thing.

Ash (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 5:03 pm

I don't think Metis is being quite fair >_>. Josh is the bullshit sickness. I'm on his side =P

Kathy (Guest), July 1st, 2007, 6:47 pm

I love thsi comic :3 It's really cute! I hope you make the next soon I can't wait to see what happens next!

xXraychizzleXx, July 1st, 2007, 8:19 pm

My theory: Josh was asking where Charles was because he knew that they hang out and Josh wanted to make sure they were alllll allooonnneee XD

bobomb, July 1st, 2007, 8:31 pm

[ 1 ]
May: Why are you looking for Charles?
Josh: Oh. I wasn't.
May: .. what?
Josh: I was just making sure we were alone. *Locks door*
May: o_______o....

dahahah sorry sorry.
Just doing a bit of brainstorming for the next page. XDDD

Faery Goddyss, July 1st, 2007, 10:54 pm

Psht. Oh people, CLEARLY Josh is asking about Charles because what is May when it comes to Charles? His super best friend who he must protect, and might slightly go insane if May is hurt in ANY way. I think Josh is just weary of Charles and would rather not run into the overprotective/mother hen best friend. Cleary. ^_^

As for Charles being off somewhere with Jay...

hold on one moment... (SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!)

I'm okay now. :D Ahhh, this comic has far too much of my love.

nuu, July 2nd, 2007, 1:45 am

Chimerical: Your art teacher is Songblade? xD Wow, that's pretty awesome!
I did pimp out the hamthology a bit on my dA, but I didn't do it too much cause I had different names and didn't want to be too confusing. Thanks for reading my story!

clancine (Guest), July 2nd, 2007, 4:41 am

jesus christ this comic makes me swoon so hard. and i love josh. with a burning passion. thank you for making awesome art <33

Sal, July 2nd, 2007, 7:14 am

I loooove chibiiiiis *cuuuute*

cliffi, July 2nd, 2007, 9:47 am

that boy needs to stop cutting his hair
i love your story hee hee

StormSpirit, July 2nd, 2007, 11:56 am

The third panel's cute ^^

DaiZuke, July 2nd, 2007, 12:15 pm

josh looks cooler with long hair
*newbie* i like your story, its interesting, i can't wait to see what happens next

thislonelyplace, July 2nd, 2007, 1:07 pm

um... shouldn't metis be looking down rather than up... cause of the stairs and same goes for josh too he should be looking up? other than that this page is awesome.

Lancha, July 2nd, 2007, 1:33 pm

hmm XD is he asking for charles for real or just checking of Metis is alone? *wishful thinking*

guest (Guest), July 2nd, 2007, 4:06 pm

lately it feels like you're rushing it... the new pages aren't as good as the first ones...

xtwentysevenx, July 2nd, 2007, 8:17 pm

all your pages are amazing and great :D
love the third panel. so adorable! *kidnapps metis* BWUAHRHAH

CaFFy (Guest), July 2nd, 2007, 10:14 pm


gridbug, July 2nd, 2007, 10:46 pm

This comic is just gorgeous. I love it and you're really suited to comic writing. Meanings and expressions are well conveyed and I love your toning and contrast!

I'll be watching this one! ^__^

kimatron, July 3rd, 2007, 1:49 am

oh jossh ur eyesss YOUR EYEESS have the depths of your soulll i could stare at them FOREVERRR jossh jossh josssh gguhhh i love you. forever.

i love the second panel too. man, you are so pro. i totally only made an account a while back because i love this comic so much +u+

i pre-ordered that short story even though i shouldn't have because I need to save monies. i couldn't help it though, because it looks LIKE ONE OF THE CHARACTERS HAS FRECKLES and freckles are one of my favorite things. along with Josh.

Ali (Guest), July 3rd, 2007, 12:23 pm

Code? If you're having trouble with HTML or anything of the like I can offer my help! It's been a while since I've been designing websites, but I think it'd come back to me rather quick. Anywho, if you're stuck, I'd love to help. allfirefliesaretechnicoloured [at] hotmail.com if you're interested! Of course, it's fine if it's something you want to get through on your own, too.

SHAZAM! (Guest), July 3rd, 2007, 4:26 pm

Super detective fan time. D<

Charles was onto Josh that day in the library ferr wanting some emo lovinz. So Charles volunteered May ferr theater where he knew Josh would be. Cause, he's Charles? fhajklsdj. And. Yeah. I rest my case.


Sal, July 3rd, 2007, 5:11 pm

did i miss anything yet *continuesly pressing the latest and next button*
are they ever gonna kiss *siiiiigh*

YukiFan, July 19th, 2007, 7:10 am

I sense a Death Note pose~

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